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Friday, 13 February 2009

My Bonny Sweetheart




Those eyes,
The countenance...
Which appear in front
At my every turn,
Stopping my breath.
I know not how to say
That a stranger has made me feel this way.
I search...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.

Nay, you know not
My angst.
My yearning for you...
Is something I cannot describe.
You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.

I wait for the day to dawn,
Whence I shall come
In your path, in your pledges
And into your arms.
Oh! Your care nonpareil...
Your love; my refuge that is never frail...
My impatient desire waits
For you, my bonny sweetheart.

I will come...
Silently.
I will invade your dreams, your thoughts.
My passion overwhelming my senses,
Losing myself in you,
I will reign.
My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...
Oh, my bonny sweetheart!

---
Written sometime in 2005, posted in my private blog in 2007 and now, reposted here. 

Valentine's Day greetings to you, and yours.

Peace.

68 comments:

americanising desi said...

old is gold and this indeed is beautifu, especially the bonny sweetheart :)

sawan said...

wow... havnt read it before [cos of obvious reasons] :P beautiful.. and this happens to be the first post i read on the V day :P

Diva said...

seems incomplete to me........

WarmSunshine said...

happy valentine's day kartz :)

this was really really cute :)
innocent and sweet!

Priya said...

It all comes in silence when you least expect it isn't it!!!

rampantheart said...

Valentine's Day Special, huh? Sweet! :)

Gail said...

And "Happy Valentine's Day' to you -
this poetry is so lovely and provoking, vulnerable and yet powerful.


Love Gail
peace

Gauri Mathur said...

:):)

Cяystal said...

Oh wowwie.
I mean seriously..I don't have better words to express my amazement.
This was a puurfect post for V-day..though I was looking around blogs to find something slightly off the track..but no complaints! :)

Enjoy!

And not to forget mentioning.this was really innocent! :)

Usha Pisharody said...

Very sweet.. esp the close, to you I shall belong, and not the other way round :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Beautiful romantic poem!May you find your bonny sweetheart soon,if you have not that is :P

Happy Valentine's Day :)

Karthik said...

Happy valentines day Kartz.. Now cme the qn to who you have written this?? :)

I love the last stanza... I will come... silently.. ;)

PS: Oh man You have reminded me again of Fedex... Writing down a post on it... :(

Tara said...

Just the innocence of it makes it so endearing. Very good job there...and I love the ending too.

"I will become yours" and not "You shall be mine"
What you call selfless love perhaps...

Sweet. :)

Valentine's day greetings monsieur, although I guess it's a little late now. :)

bondgal_rulz said...

"Losing myself in you, I will reign."....Nice. :)

Divya said...

awesome kartz! really sweet :)

Amrita~Ams said...

lovely re...
i mean it..kartz..its sumthing soothing...
nice day nice post :D
happy valentines day :)

Amrita~Ams said...

lovely re...
i mean it..kartz..its sumthing soothing...
nice day nice post :D
happy valentines day :)

Satanic Angel said...

cute one :) sending belated v day wishes ur way :)

jayu said...

lovely kartz.

I loved your usage of the words 'bonny sweetheart'.... quaint,delightful :)

Keshi said...

I wonder who that bonny swt-hrt is...cos the dedication is too beautiful :)

Im dancing alone over here Kartz and it still feels great ;-) come joine me.

Keshi.

The Rat... said...

wr art thou, my bony sweet heart... :-)

happy Valentine , K

Sashu... said...

Beautiful lines! touches a chord deep, kartz! :)

Sneha said...

sweet and beautiful.:)
happy valentine's day !!

verbivorehere said...

lovely :) a sweet gesture for the Vday??? bonny sweetheart - classy :)

Towards reclamation said...

he he he .. [devil grin]

so you found her in the last 3 years ???
;)

kanagu said...

Wonderful Kartz.. this one I was able to understand completely :)

Your new blog outlook just rocks.. its rich and the bst :)

Divya said...

you've got something on my blog :)
http://slateumchalkum.blogspot.com/2009/02/happy-birthday-p.html

Divya said...

you've got something on my blog :)
http://slateumchalkum.blogspot.com/2009/02/happy-birthday-p.html

Ani said...

hnnmm lovely.. nice one :)

n yes am back.. check out my post :P

V. Archana said...

ooo... what desires.. very nice though. :)

Kartz said...

##americanising desi
Danke! :)

Kartz said...

##sawan
Gracias amigo... Hope you had a good V-Day. :P

Kartz said...

##Diva
Of course it is... ... ...

Kartz said...

##WarmSunshine
:) Jush like li'l me me...

Kartz said...

##Priya
Bingo..! (I guess!?!)

Kartz said...

##rampantheart
Thanks! And isn't it obvious? ;)

Kartz said...

##Gail
You think so? :) Merci, madame!

Kartz said...

##Gauri
Thanks for the read... :)

Kartz said...

##Crystal
:) Gratias...

Kartz said...

##Usha Ma'am
:)

Kartz said...

##Sameera
I'm in no hurries... ;) Thanks!

Kartz said...

##Karthik
Keep thinking... ;D Thanks for the read, mate! And yep, pity, isn't it..?

Kartz said...

##Tara
Merci beaucoup madamoiselle... :) Je suis contente!

Kartz said...

##bondgal_rulz
Gratias... :)

Kartz said...

##Divya
Glad her ladyship feels thus. Thanks. :)

Kartz said...

##Amrita
Thanks a lot... :)

Kartz said...

##Satanic Angel
Thanks.. I hope you had a good one too! :)

Kartz said...

##Jayu
Thanks Auntie... :)

Kartz said...

##Keshi
Keep wondering... Cos I'm yet to find her myslef! ;D

And told you, two left feet, and ready for lessons! :D

Kartz said...

##Rat
*Bonny*!!! x(

Thanks! ;)

Kartz said...

##Sashu
Thank you very much... :)

Kartz said...

##Sneha
Thanks, dear. you too!

Kartz said...

##Towards reclamation
I wish...

Naah, I am single and content now. :)

Kartz said...

##Towards reclamation
Of course, that status will *readily* give way to commitment provided... ... ... ;D

Kartz said...

##Kanagu
Thanks, mate! :)

Kartz said...

##verbivore
Thanks ma'am... :)

Kartz said...

##Divya
Ooooh! Off I go! :D

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Kartz said...

##Ani
Wohoo! Lookie who's back. ;)

Thanks, and yep, off I go, again!

Kartz said...

##Archana
Desires, indeed. What is mankind without 'em?

Thanks! :)

яノςんム said...

wow!!

ths so very b'ful..
now since u say it was written long back, ummm, is the bonny sweetheart still around?? ;)

jayaram said...

Such a sweet poem. I was thoroughly flattered.
Can we put it this way-saw in 2005 as stranger, friend in 2007 and now in 2007....? Between lines many thing are there 2 b understood. Hope ur love fulfills ur thoughts. God bless.

Kartz said...

##Richa
Keep guessing... ;D

Kartz said...

##Jayaram Uncle
Thanks! :)

mona said...

sorry for being late... very very sweet... simply fell in love with the last verse.. and yeah... loved the way u ve addressed your love... "bonny sweetheart"!!!

Kartz said...

##mona
:)

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