Those eyes,
The countenance...
Which appear in front
At my every turn,
Stopping my breath.
I know not how to say
That a stranger has made me feel this way.
I search...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
Nay, you know not
My angst.
My yearning for you...
Is something I cannot describe.
You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
I wait for the day to dawn,
Whence I shall come
In your path, in your pledges
And into your arms.
Oh! Your care nonpareil...
Your love; my refuge that is never frail...
My impatient desire waits
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
I will come...
Silently.
I will invade your dreams, your thoughts.
My passion overwhelming my senses,
Losing myself in you,
I will reign.
My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...
Oh, my bonny sweetheart!
---
Written sometime in 2005, posted in my private blog in 2007 and now, reposted here.
Valentine's Day greetings to you, and yours.
Peace.
68 comments:
old is gold and this indeed is beautifu, especially the bonny sweetheart :)
wow... havnt read it before [cos of obvious reasons] :P beautiful.. and this happens to be the first post i read on the V day :P
seems incomplete to me........
happy valentine's day kartz :)
this was really really cute :)
innocent and sweet!
It all comes in silence when you least expect it isn't it!!!
Valentine's Day Special, huh? Sweet! :)
And "Happy Valentine's Day' to you -
this poetry is so lovely and provoking, vulnerable and yet powerful.
Love Gail
peace
:):)
Oh wowwie.
I mean seriously..I don't have better words to express my amazement.
This was a puurfect post for V-day..though I was looking around blogs to find something slightly off the track..but no complaints! :)
Enjoy!
And not to forget mentioning.this was really innocent! :)
Very sweet.. esp the close, to you I shall belong, and not the other way round :)
Beautiful romantic poem!May you find your bonny sweetheart soon,if you have not that is :P
Happy Valentine's Day :)
Happy valentines day Kartz.. Now cme the qn to who you have written this?? :)
I love the last stanza... I will come... silently.. ;)
PS: Oh man You have reminded me again of Fedex... Writing down a post on it... :(
Just the innocence of it makes it so endearing. Very good job there...and I love the ending too.
"I will become yours" and not "You shall be mine"
What you call selfless love perhaps...
Sweet. :)
Valentine's day greetings monsieur, although I guess it's a little late now. :)
"Losing myself in you, I will reign."....Nice. :)
awesome kartz! really sweet :)
lovely re...
i mean it..kartz..its sumthing soothing...
nice day nice post :D
happy valentines day :)
lovely re...
i mean it..kartz..its sumthing soothing...
nice day nice post :D
happy valentines day :)
cute one :) sending belated v day wishes ur way :)
lovely kartz.
I loved your usage of the words 'bonny sweetheart'.... quaint,delightful :)
I wonder who that bonny swt-hrt is...cos the dedication is too beautiful :)
Im dancing alone over here Kartz and it still feels great ;-) come joine me.
Keshi.
wr art thou, my bony sweet heart... :-)
happy Valentine , K
Beautiful lines! touches a chord deep, kartz! :)
sweet and beautiful.:)
happy valentine's day !!
lovely :) a sweet gesture for the Vday??? bonny sweetheart - classy :)
he he he .. [devil grin]
so you found her in the last 3 years ???
;)
Wonderful Kartz.. this one I was able to understand completely :)
Your new blog outlook just rocks.. its rich and the bst :)
you've got something on my blog :)
http://slateumchalkum.blogspot.com/2009/02/happy-birthday-p.html
you've got something on my blog :)
http://slateumchalkum.blogspot.com/2009/02/happy-birthday-p.html
hnnmm lovely.. nice one :)
n yes am back.. check out my post :P
ooo... what desires.. very nice though. :)
##americanising desi
Danke! :)
##sawan
Gracias amigo... Hope you had a good V-Day. :P
##Diva
Of course it is... ... ...
##WarmSunshine
:) Jush like li'l me me...
##Priya
Bingo..! (I guess!?!)
##rampantheart
Thanks! And isn't it obvious? ;)
##Gail
You think so? :) Merci, madame!
##Gauri
Thanks for the read... :)
##Crystal
:) Gratias...
##Usha Ma'am
:)
##Sameera
I'm in no hurries... ;) Thanks!
##Karthik
Keep thinking... ;D Thanks for the read, mate! And yep, pity, isn't it..?
##Tara
Merci beaucoup madamoiselle... :) Je suis contente!
##bondgal_rulz
Gratias... :)
##Divya
Glad her ladyship feels thus. Thanks. :)
##Amrita
Thanks a lot... :)
##Satanic Angel
Thanks.. I hope you had a good one too! :)
##Jayu
Thanks Auntie... :)
##Keshi
Keep wondering... Cos I'm yet to find her myslef! ;D
And told you, two left feet, and ready for lessons! :D
##Rat
*Bonny*!!! x(
Thanks! ;)
##Sashu
Thank you very much... :)
##Sneha
Thanks, dear. you too!
##Towards reclamation
I wish...
Naah, I am single and content now. :)
##Towards reclamation
Of course, that status will *readily* give way to commitment provided... ... ... ;D
##Kanagu
Thanks, mate! :)
##verbivore
Thanks ma'am... :)
##Divya
Ooooh! Off I go! :D
##Ani
Wohoo! Lookie who's back. ;)
Thanks, and yep, off I go, again!
##Archana
Desires, indeed. What is mankind without 'em?
Thanks! :)
wow!!
ths so very b'ful..
now since u say it was written long back, ummm, is the bonny sweetheart still around?? ;)
Such a sweet poem. I was thoroughly flattered.
Can we put it this way-saw in 2005 as stranger, friend in 2007 and now in 2007....? Between lines many thing are there 2 b understood. Hope ur love fulfills ur thoughts. God bless.
##Richa
Keep guessing... ;D
##Jayaram Uncle
Thanks! :)
sorry for being late... very very sweet... simply fell in love with the last verse.. and yeah... loved the way u ve addressed your love... "bonny sweetheart"!!!
##mona
:)
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