No prior notions, please! 
Those eyes,
The countenance...
Which appear in front
At my every turn,
Stopping my breath.
I know not how to say
That a stranger has made me feel this way.
I search...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
Nay, you know not
My angst.
My yearning for you...
Is something I cannot describe.
You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
I wait for the day to dawn,
Whence I shall come
In your path, in your pledges
And into your arms.
Oh! Your care nonpareil...
Your love; my refuge that is never frail...
My impatient desire waits
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
I will come...
Silently.
I will invade your dreams, your thoughts.
My passion overwhelming my senses,
Losing myself in you,
I will reign.
My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...
Oh, my bonny sweetheart!
The countenance...
Which appear in front
At my every turn,
Stopping my breath.
I know not how to say
That a stranger has made me feel this way.
I search...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
Nay, you know not
My angst.
My yearning for you...
Is something I cannot describe.
You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
I wait for the day to dawn,
Whence I shall come
In your path, in your pledges
And into your arms.
Oh! Your care nonpareil...
Your love; my refuge that is never frail...
My impatient desire waits
For you, my bonny sweetheart.
I will come...
Silently.
I will invade your dreams, your thoughts.
My passion overwhelming my senses,
Losing myself in you,
I will reign.
My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...
Oh, my bonny sweetheart!
18 comments:
Matangi writes:
Wow! may i know who has inspired you to write this? ;)
By anonymous user, # 30. April 2008, 05:46:42
Sri writes:
Romantic, to say the least! Well written. There should have been some intent...
By anonymous user, # 14. May 2008, 22:04:11
Kartz writes:
Thanks Matangi! And...
Allow me to append to the description above- No post notion, either! ;) :D
# 30. April 2008, 09:28:02
Anonymous writes:
Phenomenal...! Well written to say the least...
By anonymous user, # 16. June 2008, 10:05:45
@Sri
:smile:
@Anonymous
I will have to find her, first. :wink: Thank you for dropping by and have a nice day.
By Karthik.S, # 23. May 2008, 10:54:58
Anonymous writes:
Your Bonny sweetheart will be proud of her man being a poet, seeing these lines ....
Nice work kartz..........
By anonymous user, # 23. May 2008, 10:47:59
Anonymous writes:
Fantastic, mate... Very well written!
By anonymous user, # 17. June 2008, 11:08:20
Jake writes:
Excellent writing there! Good job...
By anonymous user, # 16. June 2008, 11:31:08
Swoons!
Awwww, so romantic! I love the style it is written in and phrases such as "my quest shan't go in vain" and of course, "my bonny sweatheart."
Very emotional! Real life poetry eh... well done...
Wow, another excellent one! Sorry to have taken so long in reading; I've been out of the country, and had no internet access just recently. Anyway, this is brilliant. It flowed very well, and I loved the repetition of the words 'my bonny sweetheart', it was cute . Keep writing! I'm off to read the next poem!
thanks for commenting on my poem on yembeeyae.....
i must say that u write amazingly gud!! truly loved ur poem...it was sooo sweet really!!
cud relate to it so much!
"That a stranger has made me feel this way"
"You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart"
"My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...
Oh, my bonny sweetheart!"
ohh..i started picking up my fav lines...n then i realised i'l copy the whole poem this way!! coz i loved all of it so much!! :)
:) Thank you for those kind words madamoiselle...
Welcome to Contorted Reality.
bonny sweetheart??? hehehehe..!
it was a gud one karthu
:) Thanks Gollluuutttiiii...
Reposting this for V-Day '09...
hey wow! loved it.. an amazing to read on a valentine's day..Happy valentine's day Kartz :)
Thanks a lot, Kajal... :)
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