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Monday, 28 April 2008

My Bonny Sweetheart

No prior notions, please! P:


Those eyes,
The countenance...
Which appear in front
At my every turn,
Stopping my breath.
I know not how to say
That a stranger has made me feel this way.
I search...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.

Nay, you know not
My angst.
My yearning for you...
Is something I cannot describe.
You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart.

I wait for the day to dawn,
Whence I shall come
In your path, in your pledges
And into your arms.
Oh! Your care nonpareil...
Your love; my refuge that is never frail...
My impatient desire waits
For you, my bonny sweetheart.

I will come...
Silently.
I will invade your dreams, your thoughts.
My passion overwhelming my senses,
Losing myself in you,
I will reign.
My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...

Oh, my bonny sweetheart!

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

Matangi writes:

Wow! may i know who has inspired you to write this? ;)

By anonymous user, # 30. April 2008, 05:46:42

Anonymous said...

Sri writes:

Romantic, to say the least! Well written. There should have been some intent...

By anonymous user, # 14. May 2008, 22:04:11

Anonymous said...

Kartz writes:

Thanks Matangi! And...
Allow me to append to the description above- No post notion, either! ;) :D

# 30. April 2008, 09:28:02

Anonymous said...

Anonymous writes:

Phenomenal...! Well written to say the least...

By anonymous user, # 16. June 2008, 10:05:45

Anonymous said...

@Sri
:smile:

@Anonymous
I will have to find her, first. :wink: Thank you for dropping by and have a nice day.

By Karthik.S, # 23. May 2008, 10:54:58

Anonymous said...

Anonymous writes:

Your Bonny sweetheart will be proud of her man being a poet, seeing these lines ....


Nice work kartz..........

By anonymous user, # 23. May 2008, 10:47:59

Anonymous said...

Anonymous writes:

Fantastic, mate... Very well written!

By anonymous user, # 17. June 2008, 11:08:20

Anonymous said...

Jake writes:

Excellent writing there! Good job...

By anonymous user, # 16. June 2008, 11:31:08

Sgs said...

Swoons!
Awwww, so romantic! I love the style it is written in and phrases such as "my quest shan't go in vain" and of course, "my bonny sweatheart."

kirin said...

Very emotional! Real life poetry eh... well done...

Much-Dippy said...

Wow, another excellent one! Sorry to have taken so long in reading; I've been out of the country, and had no internet access just recently. Anyway, this is brilliant. It flowed very well, and I loved the repetition of the words 'my bonny sweetheart', it was cute . Keep writing! I'm off to read the next poem!

Priyanka said...

thanks for commenting on my poem on yembeeyae.....

i must say that u write amazingly gud!! truly loved ur poem...it was sooo sweet really!!
cud relate to it so much!

"That a stranger has made me feel this way"

"You come in my dreams,
In my sleep.
Your essence teases me deep.
I reach...
For you, my bonny sweetheart"

"My quest shan't go in vain.
For one day,
I will become yours...

Oh, my bonny sweetheart!"

ohh..i started picking up my fav lines...n then i realised i'l copy the whole poem this way!! coz i loved all of it so much!! :)

Kartz said...

:) Thank you for those kind words madamoiselle...

Welcome to Contorted Reality.

animisha said...

bonny sweetheart??? hehehehe..!
it was a gud one karthu

Kartz said...

:) Thanks Gollluuutttiiii...

Kartz said...

Reposting this for V-Day '09...

the pink orchid said...

hey wow! loved it.. an amazing to read on a valentine's day..Happy valentine's day Kartz :)

Kartz said...

Thanks a lot, Kajal... :)

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