To have me, she willed to bleed.
I ne'er pay her words much heed,
Yet, she is *the One* I shall always need!
The first face to grace my eyes,
She answered all my infant cries,
She has filled my life with many a sweet surprise.
She taught me how to stand and walk,
She helped turn my incomprehensible babble to talk,
She made me listen to the tick-tock clock.
She made me aware of voice and sound,
She placed my wobbly feet firmly on the ground,
And I feel so safe when she is around.
She taught me what was wrong and right,
She would supervise my lessons with all her might,
She sought to prevent me from many a fight.
So how can I ever cease to be
Affectionate and kind to Thee,
O Thou, who art *a Mother* to me!
(An afterword - to Mother Nature)
Despite our imbecile, insolent greed,
She continues to nurture us and feed.
And what does humanity do? Happily gorge and breed.
- - -
Mother's Day greetings to Mothers everywhere!
Ad majorem Mater gloriam.
Ad majorem Mater gloriam.
52 comments:
Beautiful.:)
Awww....that was so touching. :)
And loved the way you ended it by giving an ode to Mother Nature.
Cheers
co in ci des - with mothers day...
chriz
poems on MOTHERS are always special and beautiful.
it was such a touching poem.
i loved the lines on mother nature.
take care :)
Aww.. this is soo sweet and touching. Great effort. Hope your mom's reading this.:)
but you still babble and babble and babble a-lot x-( and you fight and fight and fight a-lot
and all of mother nature's might fell short before your fight, till she slapped you tight, to make your future bright, and to remove your plight, so you see now I am right :D
typical 'pleb' waali poetry na?
Happy Mother's day....
I thought of writing a poem for mom...but i am already late as i was too involved with that story..:)
Nice poem...in fact touching tha madam...
cheers
moms are the best!!!
they say God cant be everywhere, so He made Moms :)
P.S. I cant see ur updates on my dashboard :(
oye!
that was cute...afterword was amazing...Wish all the Mothers their rightful place in our hearts today n forever:)
lovely Kartz.. so touching.. you wrote so much.. but we just can't write enough about her.. Happy Mother's Day to all the mothers .. :)
awww that was so toucin dude...ur mom must b a really proud mother
That was touching...good piece of poetry...
yeah..happy mother's day..:)
Hi Kartz-
Such a beautiful writing. It was a gift to me today and I "thank you"
Love Gail
peace.....
Splendid and fantastic lines.
tusi mera dil shatter kar dia dost!
:( I LOVE MY MOMMMMMMMMMMMMMY!
a mother's day post cant get better than this..:)
That was very touching indeed.
Happy Mother's Day Kartz :)
A wonderful poem!!
beautiful thought and really well expressed... :)
hey you really have a nice blog here :)
dat ws indeed a b'ful one!
moms r best!
happy mothers day!
Sweet. Too sweet. Thank you.
simple. with almost all emotions packed in! Awesome!
hey kartz i hope you dont mind.. because im blogrolling you.. :)
for the greater glory of mother.....
well...loved the way u presented it.... :)
Hope to see...a "for the greater glory of father" post too lol
:P
WOW....
beautiful
i also thot to write somethng for mother but but but...
i just wished her n took her for dinner...
Pallav
Kartz... amazingly beautiful.
It touched my heart,with its love.
God bless your mother-she is lucky to such an wonderful tribute.<3
I just made my ma read this!
She said and I quote - "See? See? And what did YOU do for Mother's Day???"
:P
A lovely tribute Karthik!
And thank you for your wishes!
*WOW*
wow...wish your mother read this..i would have loved it much more..without that afterword to mother nature :) so that ur mom feels it is purely for her..wish my kid writes smthng like ths for me :P
sweet tribute, mate. very very heartfelt!!!
That was beautiful. Enjoyed the last para, the one dedicated to Mother Nature. Not something I've seen at the other blog posts along similar lines...
Nice one man... cheers...
mann, wut a dedication!!!! beautiful!!
oh so beayouuutiful! :)
as usual, brilliant :) loved the very thought of addin an after thought..
Touching thoughts! very beautiful!
awww... cho chweet!
Touching... Happy Mother's day.. Am always late u know.. :P Forgive!!
tht was v v touching! Beautiful tribute!
Has a child-like charm to it... Barring the afterword! ;) Beautiful!
Amazing , this truly is the best gift to your mother.. did you show her?
Beautiful as always Kartz..
Keep smiling
I got it at last Karthik and I liked it. I think it was slightly different from your normal(as much as I have read) style, but good. The mother Nature twist at the end was interesting and so relevant.
thats a beautiful, emotional, touching ode to the mother. Couldnt be said better :)
PS: please could you add my new site to your blogroll because i guess i wont be updating Colors of my soul anymore.
The Colors Magazine
A really sweet ode to a mother :)
Now here's a poet I admire! The ability to rhyle and maintain the depth, just perfectly!
Keep it up sir, very well appreciated! :)
sorry for the late comments my friend... your blog is not opening in my mobile due to huge content...
nice one.. belated mother's day wishes to your mom :)
as always I loved this one much :)
that was so very beautiful kartz.. lovely!! n you rhyme like a dream :)
hope alzl well :) keep writing :)God bless!
This is one of the best tributes I've read in the blogosphere. Well done, you.
beautiful, mate! very very touching!
how sweet kartz!! happy mom's day belated :)
how did i miss this? u must havr posted it while i was on my road trip...
Sweet! Keep 'em coming! ;)
Impeccable!
:)
Sweet Lord that was brilliant! I laud you for coming up with such a work!
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