Step inside this heart, where you belong.
Profound, I promise, and strong
My love shall be,
All of my love; for you to see!
Submerged in yearning, my soul stays
To feel the care of your warm embrace!
Forgetting this world of material gain,
Lost in your thoughts I remain.
Step into my life, for I want you to stay
Close beside me all the way.
I will love you even in death,
For it's your essence that completes my breath!
You are mine now, and will always be!
I don't wish to know true destiny.
Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-
'Til death do us part!
40 comments:
Nice Nice hai jie:-)
:) Shukkar ho...
nice...:)
Thanks dude...
Its an aesthetic work... This poem depicts your elegance heart of love...I always eager for the acrostic work from the wordsmith like you...
Thanks machi... And welcome to Contorted Reality!
Hmmm so romantic!Nice :)
:) Glad you liked it...
Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
Enjoyed the line...
Nice poem.. Recently you've been leaning on love.. Has anything happened;)
:D Nothing yet... Am still the same fellow you knew for the past three years.
He he u shift to blogger and battery of comments
;)
see blogger welcomes you aboard
I don't wish to know true destiny.
Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-
'Til death do us part!
beauuuuutiful
Heh heh heh... :) Atleast that's *one* way where I am not getting screwed! ;)
Thanks, glad you liked it...
very well written kartz simply loved it.
Thank you, Priya. And welcome to Contorted Reality...
Wonderful depiction of romantic feelings. Nicely put :)
Thank you Lena, and welcome to Contorted Reality.
heyy thank u for stopping by..
hnnmm love.. its such a different emotion.. and it brings out so much in us.. and makes u feel complete..even when it is lost.. n all the pain.. its still worth it..
Yeah, you're right... :)
Welcome to Contorted Reality!
thank u dear :)
Contorted Reality. I did find this blog sometime back. I don't remember reading it though, no idea why i would do that to such a blog!
I adored the 'obiter dicta' thing :)
coming to the poem, I loved the prelude of the poem.. for love is beyond graves!
i immediately loved the first line start. stepping in ! since I am obsessed with this poem these days the start of which is, 'Its the stepping out of my shadow that scares me, I so lack the nobility every seeker must possess in spades'
I have something with the stepping in and stepping out i think..
the rest was good too, the flow was perfect. I liked this line too 'I will love you even in death,'
and the last three lines :) the fate aiming the dart and till death do us part!!
a very very nice read!
Keep blogging.. and thankyou for the blogroll. :)
asbah.
You ignore something... And it comes back to haunt you. ;) *grin*
Welcome to Contorted Reality.
Glad you enjoyed reading my work. And it is a pleasure blogrolling you. Peace, and have a nice day.
Very nice lines and the end is good.
Thank you for visiting my blog.
Thank you, Priya. Welcome to Contorted Reality...
Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-
'Til death do us part!
nice lines! :)
Thanks.. :)
This is the second thing I am reading on your blog, I am an instant fan!! =)
XOXO ;)
Merci beaucoup mmle...
ok i am coming to ur blog for the first time....so i guess this is a beauty of dark poems man
the words were in good flow and woww ....i really loved each lines in this poem,....
"Step into my life, for I want you to stay
Close beside me all the way.
I will love you even in death,
For it's your essence that completes my breath!"
i loved these lines...
blogrolling you with ur consents ....
tc will be back
www.thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com
First of all, a hearty welcome to Contorted Reality.
Thank you for your kind words. I am glad it was to your liking. I wrote this as a continuation of another poem (which has been linked at the beginning of the post), "Fate, and the Fall"
Thanks for the blogroll... I will return your kind gesture pronto. Please feel free to drop by again. I host a number of discussions here as may have noticed, and it will please me to no end if you can add to them too.
Peace, take care, and have a nice day.
I must say you have so beautiful heart , this beautiful poem showing it .....sweet words and beautiful meaning ....keep this sweet flow in ur poem,dear.
Nicely and beautifully written.:)
Thank you Sneha... Welcome to Contorted Reality. Feel free to visit again.
rightly said...love goes beyond the grave....truly loved ur poem...
"I will love you even in death,
For it's your essence that completes my breath!"
"Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-
'Til death do us part!"
lovely lines..beautiful poem.......touching...
d first poem i read on ur blog ws my bonny sweetheart...loved it a lot...ws forced to read others!
u r too gud!!
:) Gee... Thanks a ton!
wow... that was beautiful...touched my heart...!!
@mona
Thanks! :)
@Lavanya
Thanks...
kartz!!! u r a magician...simply brilliant!
@Trinaa
Wow, glad you feel so. But well, a long way to go - is how I see it.
Frost - Miles to go before I sleep.
Thanks for the read.
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