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Saturday, 13 September 2008

'Til death do us part!

Fate might have played it's fall, but it is said, love goes beyond the grave.


Step inside this heart, where you belong.
Profound, I promise, and strong
My love shall be,
All of my love; for you to see!

Submerged in yearning, my soul stays
To feel the care of your warm embrace!
Forgetting this world of material gain,
Lost in your thoughts I remain.

Step into my life, for I want you to stay
Close beside me all the way.
I will love you even in death,
For it's your essence that completes my breath!

You are mine now, and will always be!
I don't wish to know true destiny.
Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-

'Til death do us part!

40 comments:

Gauri Mathur said...

Nice Nice hai jie:-)

Kartz said...

:) Shukkar ho...

Ramanathan Palaniappan said...

nice...:)

Kartz said...

Thanks dude...

sundarji said...

Its an aesthetic work... This poem depicts your elegance heart of love...I always eager for the acrostic work from the wordsmith like you...

Kartz said...

Thanks machi... And welcome to Contorted Reality!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Hmmm so romantic!Nice :)

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Kartz said...

:) Glad you liked it...

Manikandan said...

Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,

Enjoyed the line...
Nice poem.. Recently you've been leaning on love.. Has anything happened;)

Kartz said...

:D Nothing yet... Am still the same fellow you knew for the past three years.

descrying the shadows said...

He he u shift to blogger and battery of comments
;)
see blogger welcomes you aboard

I don't wish to know true destiny.
Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-

'Til death do us part!


beauuuuutiful

Kartz said...

Heh heh heh... :) Atleast that's *one* way where I am not getting screwed! ;)

Thanks, glad you liked it...

Priya Joyce said...

very well written kartz simply loved it.

Kartz said...

Thank you, Priya. And welcome to Contorted Reality...

Lena said...

Wonderful depiction of romantic feelings. Nicely put :)

Kartz said...

Thank you Lena, and welcome to Contorted Reality.

ani said...

heyy thank u for stopping by..

hnnmm love.. its such a different emotion.. and it brings out so much in us.. and makes u feel complete..even when it is lost.. n all the pain.. its still worth it..

Kartz said...

Yeah, you're right... :)

Welcome to Contorted Reality!

ani said...

thank u dear :)

.a. said...

Contorted Reality. I did find this blog sometime back. I don't remember reading it though, no idea why i would do that to such a blog!

I adored the 'obiter dicta' thing :)

coming to the poem, I loved the prelude of the poem.. for love is beyond graves!

i immediately loved the first line start. stepping in ! since I am obsessed with this poem these days the start of which is, 'Its the stepping out of my shadow that scares me, I so lack the nobility every seeker must possess in spades'
I have something with the stepping in and stepping out i think..

the rest was good too, the flow was perfect. I liked this line too 'I will love you even in death,'

and the last three lines :) the fate aiming the dart and till death do us part!!

a very very nice read!

Keep blogging.. and thankyou for the blogroll. :)


asbah.

Kartz said...

You ignore something... And it comes back to haunt you. ;) *grin*

Welcome to Contorted Reality.

Glad you enjoyed reading my work. And it is a pleasure blogrolling you. Peace, and have a nice day.

Priya said...

Very nice lines and the end is good.

Thank you for visiting my blog.

Kartz said...

Thank you, Priya. Welcome to Contorted Reality...

Matangi Mawley said...

Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-

'Til death do us part!

nice lines! :)

Kartz said...

Thanks.. :)

Richa said...

This is the second thing I am reading on your blog, I am an instant fan!! =)
XOXO ;)

Kartz said...

Merci beaucoup mmle...

The Solitary Writer. said...

ok i am coming to ur blog for the first time....so i guess this is a beauty of dark poems man
the words were in good flow and woww ....i really loved each lines in this poem,....

"Step into my life, for I want you to stay
Close beside me all the way.
I will love you even in death,
For it's your essence that completes my breath!"

i loved these lines...

blogrolling you with ur consents ....

tc will be back

www.thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com

Kartz said...

First of all, a hearty welcome to Contorted Reality.

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad it was to your liking. I wrote this as a continuation of another poem (which has been linked at the beginning of the post), "Fate, and the Fall"

Thanks for the blogroll... I will return your kind gesture pronto. Please feel free to drop by again. I host a number of discussions here as may have noticed, and it will please me to no end if you can add to them too.

Peace, take care, and have a nice day.

Ree [Lavanya] said...

I must say you have so beautiful heart , this beautiful poem showing it .....sweet words and beautiful meaning ....keep this sweet flow in ur poem,dear.

Sneha said...

Nicely and beautifully written.:)

Kartz said...

Thank you Sneha... Welcome to Contorted Reality. Feel free to visit again.

Priyanka said...

rightly said...love goes beyond the grave....truly loved ur poem...
"I will love you even in death,
For it's your essence that completes my breath!"
"Fate may aim it's poisoned dart,
To which I will but say-

'Til death do us part!"

lovely lines..beautiful poem.......touching...

d first poem i read on ur blog ws my bonny sweetheart...loved it a lot...ws forced to read others!
u r too gud!!

Kartz said...

:) Gee... Thanks a ton!

mona said...

wow... that was beautiful...touched my heart...!!

Kartz said...

@mona

Thanks! :)

Kartz said...

@Lavanya
Thanks...

Trinaa said...

kartz!!! u r a magician...simply brilliant!

Kartz said...

@Trinaa
Wow, glad you feel so. But well, a long way to go - is how I see it.

Frost - Miles to go before I sleep.

Thanks for the read.

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