Everyone has an inner self. They may or may not reveal/listen to it. I am no different. I possess an inner self; one that in some ways is my polar opposite. If I am the ice, he is the fire. Together, we form the searing ice and the congealing flame...
Deep with⋅in sub⋅con⋅scious⋅ness I dwell,
My el⋅e⋅ment leaves you blind⋅ed.
I make your ver⋅y pride swell,
And you re⋅main hat⋅ed.
Un⋅leash me! Be⋅hold...
Fu⋅ry un⋅told!
Nev⋅er gauge;
I am...
Rage!
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Greetings populi... Been a hectic week. First, a faulty internet connection that marred my catching up with your blogs. And then, an all important certification. Got done with it today... Which effectively means I am a Sun Certified Java Programmer. *gosh! And to think how much I loathe programming... I am an electronics graduate!*
And oh yes, this nonnet should have been published long back! Catch up with you all soon.
Peace.
Peace.
71 comments:
we all have it, dont we? You managed to actually reflect the rage with your words. Great nonet. Totally liked it!
And congratulations, Mr. Java-programmer! Did I tell you i can write "Hello, World!" using Java? :D
wow that was really nice thought..
and yaaayy ur finally done.. pheww.. so now that out of the way.. :)
so hope to catch up some time soon :) till then take care.. byeee
You needn't have split the syllables..I get so confused :O
But yes..after deep thinking and understanding,I can judge out that this was b'ful!
And happy working =P
Ok...so this is what a nonnet should look like!!...:P :D
Glad to see that you are back on your blog....
The nonnet was undoubtedly AMAZING!!...
Loved the pic...Mr. Certified Programmer!!
I hate programming too!!!
my words are a means to tell of my soul, my spirit, my essence, my core.
I love your images of the forces that provoke us. I too know of dark and light. My life demands it. I appreiate your depth, it is vast and strong. Most important, it is good.
Gail
peace.....
congratulations sir SCJP!!
and the nonnet was brilliant.. especially the way you've clearly separated the syllables.. very fine indeed.
although, both sides of the picture seem to reveal fury.. *shudder* scary :P
hmmm tat oh arre mom dad probs :P
Awesome .:)
hmm.. i was with the same fury a few months ago. i guess later, i came to terms with the world revolving right where i was revolving left! but yes. i understand.
i shall not congratulate u for the java programmer part of this because(im sorry to be saying) i see only a grey future with a laptop and lots of caffeine and things such as "cout<< " (which is the best of my java knowledge.)
As for the nonnet it was erm good considering the rules you would have to follow and rage is well not something that can be spoken of..i have this feeling that rage as an independant emotion doesnt exist. but it might just be my niceness speaking.
thnks for separating the syllables with little red blocks, otherwise i would have had to google them..
hey nice one..very true about the 2 sides in us! and congrats for the achievent yaar!
Mr, Java programmer ;P
good one there...looks like u are basking under a bouquet of awards..bask away my friend...:)
To Mr. Kartz
You are welcome to my blogs.
I have read your short poems. You can put many nuts in a shell. I would be visiting here for more literature from you.
Naval Langa
http://humorhumour.blogspot.com/
oh, so many updates for me to read, i hope to get back to all posts shortly :)
every one has a inner, that's not the big deal, the worst in my case (and as depicted by your post as well) is that i have many me's living in myself, 180 degree opposites, a narcissist and a self-detester, an optimist and a pessimist - and living in harmony!
i am such a happily sadist *sigh*
ps. nice post
oh, so many updates for me to read, i hope to get back to all posts shortly :)
every one has a inner, that's not the big deal, the worst in my case (and as depicted by your post as well) is that i have many me's living in myself, 180 degree opposites, a narcissist and a self-detester, an optimist and a pessimist - and living in harmony!
i am such a happily sadist *sigh*
ps. nice post
Congratulations.Loved the poem,and the image.
erm, lets just say i like to prove my point..
rage always is born out of hurt..its not like ur insides are exploding with rage all the time or anything..
this was a great one :) you managed to portray it so nicely :) Kudos!!
And congrats for becoming SCJP :)
it's a great feeling!!! Congrats!
Well done... ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT
@Lena - HELLO WORLD...teeheehee
sometimes a few words speak volumes... exactly what i wish to say about your nonnet..a wonderful thought, and extremely well-expressed...definitely commendable.. capturing so much in such limited words
coming to the post... i totally agree with you... we all have a dr.jekyll and mr.hyde inside us..
great to finally read something from your side...missed your posts, i must say.. waiting for your next one.. keep blogging.. cheers!!
Loved the nonnet!Way to go :)
Congrats on the certification!
Hi...first time here...dropped in from Mona's...
Loved this post....and the pic was jus great!!!
BRRRILLIANT!!!
even if rage is triggered by hurt, it cannot feed upon itself..you can be angry only when something does not live upto your expectations..rage comes from love..when love, belief, trust is broken..as long as love does not exist rage cannot..(i have feeling we are arguing on completely different terms and should be leaving it off here but it is not everyday that i meet a "foeman worthy of my steel")
u gave me the impression being a "realist" who stares at reality in the face and does not shirk away, which in my opinion does not exist..but hey atleast u've learnt to take life as it comes. much admired.i know all this coz im extremely assuming. lol
my sincere apologies for talking too much, people hate that in me and they love it too.
##Lena
Thanks buddy... :)
And oh yeah! I can write "Hello, World!" with a pen! :P
##Ani
You said it! :) Catch you soon buddy... We are yet to finish something! Boy are we good at procrastinating! :D
##CяystąL
Thanks; and well, the splitting was for people who might play smart-alec to try proving the Exultant One wrong. ;)
No work yet... :P Pukka jobless.
##Akshat
Hmmm... I guess this is how a nonnet should look like. ;) Thanks. And don't remind me about programming. Enough for the time being! :D
##Gail
Thank you for the appreciation. Welcome to Contorted Reality. I appreciate your stopping by and voicing out. I hope you keep visiting.
Peace.
##Divya
Thanks buddy!
There there... Don't shudder. Ne'er fear whilst am 'ere. :)
##Priya Joyce
:P Look London, talk Tokyo?
##AV
Glad you did buddy...
##Sneha
Merci madamoiselle...
##Nivedita
Replied. :)
##verbivore
Thanks! :)
##Palaniappan
:) Guess I am...
##Naval Langa
Your readership is much obliged and appreciated.
Peace.
##.a.
What are you waiting for? Jaldi dekho! :)
PS: Thanks.
##Jayu Auntie
Thank you so much! :) Means a lot...
##Nivedita
Replied, again. :)
##WarmSunshine
Thanks buddy,,, A nice feeling? ;) Can't say anything yet! It's a relief. That, I can tell you.
##Heart'n'Soul
Gratias. :)
##Mona
Thanks. Yes, it does feel good to be back. :)
##Sameera
I must thank you... You were the first to put one up! :)
##Rajesh
Thanks mate.
Welcome to Contorted Reality. I appreciate your time. Keep visiting.
Peace.
##Nivedita
You can rest assured that I have absolutely no reason to 'hate' you for voicing out. Neither is there any need to render an apology. Period.
Peace.
i really dont lose anything by apologising..esp when im bordering rude..nice that u call it 'voicing out'.
following ur example i shall also say peace(its quite smart in a way..if someone tries to retaliate it will make them feel bad that ur being a good sport and they r not..not that im implying ur doing that :P)
this one is lovely piece again!!
:D
the Fan is turning into an AC, make arrangements, its winters ;)
I didnt get the java programmer joke .. but the posts swell .. gr8 job man ..!
wrote a very long thank u and all when my net decided to be mean again..i dont blame it the dsl cable is stretched and pulled to 20houses all of whom want to go o9 at the same time..
my tuition teacher made me walk halfway arnd the rectangular classroom and then turn around and walk back..and that was AC!!! how much smarter can a person get? he made me feel like an electron!!
lol im a bit konked up..and the only conversation i seem to be having is half hour on the net that too no msngr..moms orders..will have to make do with jabbering to strangers who have the least concern which is of course fun in its own ways..now i will sit me down to transformers..how much more nicer it is when the same name is given to an action film with loud explosions and yelling :(
:-o The little girl is in awe lol...
Congrats for becoming a Java certified programmer :)
This is a very simple and powerful post. Very nice :) I liked it
Visit my blog..
Something awaits..:P
http://akt-akshat.blogspot.com/2008/12/santas-bag-just-opened.html
##Nivedita
Replied. :P
##Richa
:) Chennai mein there is no "winter". Your said AC-ship is much obliged.
##R3d3MpTioN
Thanks. And welcome to Contorted Reality. Keep visiting...
Peace.
##Nivedita
That's ok. I quite understand. And I'm only too glad to help. Oh yeah, your teacher sure had a novel way of clarifying your doubt!
Peace.
##Ayushi
Oh really? ;) There is no charge for 'awe'someness...
##kanaguonline
Thanks bro'...
##Naval Langa
Gratias. Season's greetings to you and all your family too!
##Akshat
Wow, a Santa at 16? ;) Thanks mate!
Beautiful like always:-)
:))
Rampant heart can relate to what you've written:D Her ever-rampant heart and indifferent soul may have a story to tell too! :P
Now, dear @Nivedita is right:) Sheer human psychology!
the picture and the nonnet steal the show :) and yeah, blind spot, reminds me of the Jo'Harry window :)
##Gauri
Thanks... :)
##Ranjani
Waiting to her ladyship's ever rampant heart's tale...
;)
##Preeti
:) Thanks...
well said dude!! so damn true...
but i guess the inner self is the truer one...what we manifest is more of what we perceive others would accept
i guess if we all lived our inner selves, we'd all be lonely creatures :P
Cheers
CRD
wot say?
##CRDHa ha, so damn true man! Lonely, indeed! Thanks for the comment!
##CRDHa ha, so damn true man! Lonely, indeed! Thanks for the comment!
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