Nightshade, in despair,
Tenaciously clings to the
Melancholic rose.
Entering this world,
Bald headed and round bellied,
We leave the same way.
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I Fail...I Pass
7 years ago
Saturday, 11 April 2009
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profound indeed..
gotta know from FB and dived in :D
thats one of the best i read from you :)
and a beautiful picture too
We leave the same way..yes.. ofcourse, having learnt a few things :)
Well, most of us do. Thank God for those few who don't.
Profound lines....
Cheers
Fantablous!
Cheers!
:-)
Fantabulous*:D
ooooooooh heavy!!!
i am dying!
some thought that was... shows the mature writer in you..
Hi Kartz-
I love your words, and your site is so beautiful.
I was thrilled to see me on the side. :-) wow, and thank you.....
you are the best.
Love Gail
peace.....
Poetic profundity.....
that's true...ver y true...the first ans the last steps r always similar.
Fear of metamorphosis?
A missing link?
Good continue ur best at. Bye
& god bless.
loved it !! specially the second one !! :)
n sowiee for the blunders on my page :( editing it now .. thanks for the read !! hope u liked it !!
very nice one Kartz..
I loved it :)
Ah, nice thought!
lovely.. :)
cheers!
beautiful...
now, i have to learn Haiku too...
it seems to be complicated to weave so much with so little..but the final read is satisfying:)
thanks again for sharing this!
beautiful; jus beautiful...
very true....
awesome...
Hey i m wondering Man...wht a great vacab u hv....
applaud applaud... :)
well well well, neat stuff u got in 'ere..! keep writin'...
G
baap re...yeh kya tha???
too good, mate... too good!
whts d use..?
wow wow wow kartz!!! that was sooo....wow!! what a vocab...what use of words...*pat on the back* wow!!
haikus yeyy :) i am in luv with the second stanza!! respects.. bows.. good one bro!
I loved it WOW Kartz!
We enter and leave the same way, except when we leave we r just unhappier.
Keshi.
philosophic. period. & pretty much true, too!
So true :)
Loved it.
Jeez, gud writin dere; keep em rolled...
ausssommee!
has its depth & truth intact as it always with your words :) just roamed around to see if i have missed nething? not much i guess :)
we come in naked and we leave naked too
true
:)
good
very beautiful :)
Reminded me of the 'Cest la vie' post you did for my blog. Bravo!
:)
really nice thoughts... Keep it up!!!!!
Brilliant,profound- a poem par excellence!
I love it Kartz.
You have described birth and death so lucidly in two lines... amazing.
This one deserves more than a round of applause.
Take a bow,Kartz.
beautiful.. loved the picture..
beautiful.. loved the picture..
a beauty; 'nuf said!
##RichaAh! Thanks! :)
And I hate it when Blogger does this! Not the first/second time this is happening. No, not the third either! x(
##LenaThanks a megaton, buddy!
##NetikaEggjacktly... :)
##IshaHeh heh heh... Thanks, buddy. ;)
##GauriThanks...
##Gauri:P
##Seher DiOMG! Call the doc! :P
Thanks for the read, dear... :)
##KajalDanke...
##GailThank you for the kind words, ma'am... :)
##AnonymousGratias. For the read, and the visit.
##JoyceYeah, kinda...
##JayaramThanks, uncle. So good to see you again.
##PratibhaThank you.
And not an issue, buddy. Am a bit finicky abt my name/alias, that's all. :) And u can bet ur bottom dollar tht I liked ur retourne!
##KanaguThanks, buddy...
##JakeThanks, pal...
##AVThanks dudette... Good to see u again!
##VinnieA pleasure. :) Thanks for the read.
##ObsidianGratias...
##PallavThanks, dude. And well, ummm... Dunno wht to say to the vocab part! :)
##Anonymous/GThanks, whoever u are!
##MayzUmmm... BLOG POST! ;D ;p"
##dark-arthasThanks...
##AnonymousNothing. Just to kill my time. And others' too...
##SandeepMuch gratitude. :)
##AnilMuch gratitude, again. :)
##KeshiI wanna change that! :) Lets see!
blitzkrieg Thanks... Glad u found it so.
##MeeraThank you.
Welcome to Contorted Reality. I appreciate your time to stop-by and leave a note. Hope to see you more often.
Peace. Have a nice day.
##AnonymousDanke...
##d-sticklerThanks...
##verbivore
Naah, not much! So good to see you again, ma'am. :) Thanks!
##ChrizHa ha! True! :P
##MehreenIt did? In what way, if I may ask... :)
##Anonymous
Thanks a lot!
##Jayu
*wonders what to say*
:)
*at loss for words*
##Jayu
*mumbles a THANK YOU!*
:)
##MatangiThanks yaar... :)
##MatangiThanks yaar... :)
##AnonymousThanks, mate...
Im sure ur the 'odd' one out ;-)
Keshi.
##KeshiUmmm... I've said it before - to make a difference, *be* the difference. :)
I know I mite ve sounded too far fetched there! But still, if I kept regretting stuff, what's the use of living? I just hope I remember that when it's time to go! ;D
Interesting thoughts...
Nice flow of thought.....
##ArnavThanks, dude...
##OvermindGratias...
##AnonymousThanks for stopping by...
Sensible thoughts.
Cheers
Entering this world, blad headed and round bellied, we leave the same way.. now that is something to really think about...
Haiku
##Mahesh
Thank you. I value your comment.
##workhard
Indeed... Thanks for the read!
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