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Saturday, 18 April 2009

Yin... Yang... Yearn



An eternity between meetings, 
And an instant of togetherness. 
Periods of no touch, 
With a chain of thoughts about your closeness and dearness, 
Pining for your warmth and tenderness, 
Yearning for those calling arms and luscious lips. 
The quintessential, whole life;
Soul and body fuse in unison, 
With no alpha or omega, 
Where everything is unfathomable and clear. 
My half thirsts for your half, 
Yang awaits Yin,
To combine. Unity.
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106 comments:

яノςんム said...

wow.. a love angle comes very occassionally from u..
:D

but it is as nice as always.. n to tell ya, i have been expecting one since i read ur comment on Mayz' blog ::D

the pink orchid said...

:) it was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.. :)

Priya said...

Very cute:))

bondgal_rulz said...

To say that it was a great piece of work would be an understatement. :)

I'm curious though as to what brought it about ?

Cheers

Netika Lumb said...

Ahem..ahem..Will I be infiltrating if I ask you about the flow of thoughts?? Or do I just say, it's beautifully written..

You don't need to answer that, I have no intentions of putting you under a spot or anything.. Not as if you will easily come under one easily..

AV said...

sweet! but seriously.. is tat yang(by ne chance) you??:)

americanising desi said...

wah ji wah
i appreciate you to make so much sense to me while others actually give up.
beautiful my friend!
simply beautiful!

Vinnie said...

hmmmm...yearning is always sensitive, beautiful n poetic..n this piece is a superbly brought out yearning...beautiful!

Gail said...

Hi Kartz -


I simply adore you and love your posts. I wonder too, what prompted such poetry - words of passion.

Love and peace
Gail

WarmSunshine said...

A new side to you Kartz :)

Beautiful and almost dreamy. Yet the innocence is there :)

*thumbs up*

Sumit said...

nicely put!!

jayaram said...

Becoming passionately romantic?
Nothing wrong-

oo7 said...

i like like...
nice one

Arnab Majumdar said...

Beautifully portrayed...

Priya Joyce said...

niice...
I guess am reading for the first tym something on love by u :P

I guess the usage of the words yin and Yang..is cool!!

I guess u've used it to explain..opposite forces..(here sexes) attract../get attracted :P/wait for union.

?? is it??

in that case...I loved it..otherwise ..samjaa do :P

Chronicwriter said...

:)

romantic.. some one is stepping into your life i hope so

www.chronicwriter.com

Amrita~Ams said...

u r in luv????

awesum :)

Mayz said...

this kinda reminded me of d comment u left on mah blog...d yin n d yang...d mirror..male n female one...remember??

Pallav said...

can i know the origin of thought...

hmmm...

ths is intersting man

cheers :)
Pallav

verbivorehere said...

so sweetly romantic..the kind of romance before you dare to date :)brought a smile and a question? is that you ? :))

Obsidian said...

whoa whoa w-h-o-a... :)

dark-arthas said...

nice 'un dere, mate. lovely flow of thots!

Praveen said...

someone in love?
separated from ur love?

Overmind said...

Rrrrrooohh-maaannntic! :D

Anonymous said...

such ardour and passion... Way to go!

Keshi said...

u hv a great skill with words...wonderful Kartz!

Keshi.

divyaiyer said...

Ahem Ahem. Wot is this? Love Shove n all eh! ;)
One question thought, for that serious a poetry, why do u have those bears n all in the illustration! Really!

Jake said...

Impressive... ;) The pines are for..?

sawan said...

wow, bro.. sexy!! :P

kevin said...

Hidden feelings...?? ;)

blake said...

such passion... beautifully expressed!!!

Anonymous said...

Pangs of separation... Painfully beautiful. And romantic. Keep writing...

Little Girl Lost said...

my half thirsts for your half...
loved that line :)
hello Kartz... this was my first visit to your blog and i loved it very very much... your poet makes these words come alive.
hope to keep coming back for more.
take care. and please do visit...

Little Girl Lost said...

my half thirsts for your half...
loved that line :)
hello Kartz... this was my first visit to your blog and i loved it very very much... your poet makes these words come alive.
hope to keep coming back for more.
take care. and please do visit...

Anonymous said...

The *lust* in love..?

ki said...

I like! :)

Being in a long distance relationship of sorts... this poem really touched my heart. :)

G said...

plain awesome, mate... beautifully brought out!

Anonymous said...

touching... really touching,,, good luck!

Divya said...

:O
kartz??? really?? you wrote that??!!
:O

Anonymous said...

simply amazing... How emotions can be put forth. A beauty...

mona said...

yang and yin... chinese philosophy right?... i read it in my text... lol... anyways... those two words had left me enchanted then too... something mystical about the two words... and about your poem too.. loved it.. !!

Little Girl Lost said...

thanks for liking the poem kartz...
please see if you like this one...

http://amritorupa.blogspot.com/2009/04/insomnia.html

did you like my blog? if you did, please become a follower so that i can share with you whenever i write. it will be cool to have a reader like you who is himself a poet.

Dheera Kitchlu said...

First, I am totally overwhelmed by your Web site! It blew me away. I loved the poem too. Somewhat tortured, yet hopeful? Really evocative. Thanks.

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Wow that was beautiful....felt as if one soulmate is missing the other..:)

good one...


do visit mine sometime...

leep writing..:)

Ayushi said...

ooh,such intense emotions! :)
(but thats a really vulgar photo up there :P, this excellent poem deserves more than a cartoon! :P )

jayu said...

Kartz-this was amazing.

Mesmering usage of words.

Take a bow,Mr.Swaminathan.

Little Girl Lost said...

ok, but come read my story...

Pretty Me!! said...

neat !!! i say both for the prtrayal of feelings and also for the simplicity !! enjoyed reading it :)

Kartz said...

##Richa
Ha ha, yeah, not often... Figured it's time for a change and Mayz's posts sorta helped too. ;)

Kartz said...

##Kajal
Merci, mademoiselle...

Kartz said...

##Priya
Thank you, ma'am... :)

Kartz said...

##Isha
Thanks, buddy... What brought it about? Lets just keep it under wraps for now. ;p

Kartz said...

##Netika
Ha ha; nothing like what u think. I assure you. :)

Kartz said...

##AV
Heh heh heh, keep guessing, dudette! ;)

Kartz said...

##Seher
Thanks, di! :)

Kartz said...

##Vinnie
Gratias, milady. Too kind. :)

Kartz said...

##Gail
Thank you, ma'am. Glad you liked it.

Kartz said...

##Mehreen
Ha ha, thanks yaar... :)

Kartz said...

##Sumit
Thanks.

Welcome to Contorted Reality. I appreciate your time to stop by to leave a note.

Hope to see you more often.

Peace. Have a nice day.

Kartz said...

##jayaram
Thanks, uncle... Glad you liked it.

Kartz said...

##Vikram
Thanks, bro... :)

Kartz said...

##Arnab
Thanks dude...

Kartz said...

##JoyceHeh heh heh... I leave it to the reader to interpret. ;)

Kartz said...

##Chriz
Heh heh heh; none yet. ;)

Kartz said...

##Amrita
Naah... :)

Kartz said...

##Mayz
Oh yeah... I did say so just a while back. And guess what your next post turned out to be. ;)

Kartz said...

##Pallav
Well, lets keep the origin under wraps. Just thoughts in motion. ;)

Thanks dude...

Kartz said...

##verbivore
Heh heh heh, y the doubt? ;) This blog doesn't have a co-author! ;P

Kartz said...

##Obsidian
Gratias...

Kartz said...

##dark-arthas
Thanks, mate...

Kartz said...

##Praveen
Naah... Nothing at all. :)

Kartz said...

##Overmind
Thanks!

Kartz said...

##Anonymous
Glad you liked it...

Kartz said...

##Keshi
Thanks a ton. dudette... :)

Kartz said...

##Divya Iyer
Heh heh heh... Bas, timepass. I cdnt get any other pic. ;) And y *love-shove*? Ummm, chumma, pozhudu pole... :D

Kartz said...

##Jake
Ha ha... No one, yet! :D

Kartz said...

##Sawan
Thanks! ;)

Kartz said...

##Kevin
;D no comment...

Kartz said...

##Blake
Thanks, dude... Glad you stopped-by.

workhard said...

Wanting to be together.. what a lovely poem

Haiku Poems

Kartz said...

##Anonymous
Thanks for stopping-by...

Kartz said...

##Amritorupa
Thank you for stopping-by to leave a note. I appreciate your time...

Kartz said...

##Amritorupa
Thank you for stopping-by to leave a note. I appreciate your time...

Kartz said...

##Anonymous
Or u may say, *love* in lust... Ur take. :P

Kartz said...

##Kirti
Thanks. Glad you like it.

Kartz said...

##G
Thanks...

Kartz said...

##Anonymous
Thanks for the read...

Kartz said...

##Divya
*ahem* Yes. :)

Kartz said...

##Anonymous
Thanks...

Kartz said...

##Mona
Yep, Chinese thought... Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Kartz said...

##Amritorupa
A pleasure... Blogrolling you now. Will follow you when I get Google's Friend Connect sorted.

Kartz said...

##Dheera
Thanks a megaton, ma'am. Humbled. :)

And yes, hope. The *only* good thing that came out from Pandora's box.

Kartz said...

##Mahesh
Thanks for the visit. I appreciate your time to read and leave a note.

Peace.

Kartz said...

##Ayushi
Heh heh heh, why don't you make an apt cartoon for this. ;)

Thanks for the read. How are you recovering?

Kartz said...

##Jayu
*bows*

Merci, madame! :)

Kartz said...

##Amritorupa
Will do.

Kartz said...

##Pratibha
Thank you... :)

Kartz said...

##workhard
Thank you for the read. I appreciate your time to leave a note. Keep visiting! :)

Peace.

Victoria Bishop said...

LOVED it, thanks for tagging me on this

Kartz said...

Thanks for the read... And welcome to my blog.

Will tag you to my posts, henceforth...

Ankita said...

you know what this one forces me to wonder where do u get ur inspiration from...you have one for sure..
it is so romantic n beautiful..lovely piece of work.it is a pleasure to read them...keep writing..
cheers.

Kartz said...

Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate your time and readership.

My inspiration(s)? Life. The people I meet. Death.

Peace.

Priyanka said...

it ws soo b'ful !
romantic n lovely!!
ur poems r so niceeeee

Kartz said...

##Priyanka
And you are too kind... :)

Brosreview said...

Neatly done!!! Keep writing!!! I am following your blog henceforth. It is a nice spot.

Kartz said...

##AjeyThank you. I appreciate your readership.

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