An eternity between meetings,
And an instant of togetherness.
Periods of no touch,
With a chain of thoughts about your closeness and dearness,
Pining for your warmth and tenderness,
Yearning for those calling arms and luscious lips.
The quintessential, whole life;
Soul and body fuse in unison,
With no alpha or omega,
Where everything is unfathomable and clear.
My half thirsts for your half,
Yang awaits Yin,
To combine. Unity.
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106 comments:
wow.. a love angle comes very occassionally from u..
:D
but it is as nice as always.. n to tell ya, i have been expecting one since i read ur comment on Mayz' blog ::D
:) it was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.. :)
Very cute:))
To say that it was a great piece of work would be an understatement. :)
I'm curious though as to what brought it about ?
Cheers
Ahem..ahem..Will I be infiltrating if I ask you about the flow of thoughts?? Or do I just say, it's beautifully written..
You don't need to answer that, I have no intentions of putting you under a spot or anything.. Not as if you will easily come under one easily..
sweet! but seriously.. is tat yang(by ne chance) you??:)
wah ji wah
i appreciate you to make so much sense to me while others actually give up.
beautiful my friend!
simply beautiful!
hmmmm...yearning is always sensitive, beautiful n poetic..n this piece is a superbly brought out yearning...beautiful!
Hi Kartz -
I simply adore you and love your posts. I wonder too, what prompted such poetry - words of passion.
Love and peace
Gail
A new side to you Kartz :)
Beautiful and almost dreamy. Yet the innocence is there :)
*thumbs up*
nicely put!!
Becoming passionately romantic?
Nothing wrong-
i like like...
nice one
Beautifully portrayed...
niice...
I guess am reading for the first tym something on love by u :P
I guess the usage of the words yin and Yang..is cool!!
I guess u've used it to explain..opposite forces..(here sexes) attract../get attracted :P/wait for union.
?? is it??
in that case...I loved it..otherwise ..samjaa do :P
:)
romantic.. some one is stepping into your life i hope so
www.chronicwriter.com
u r in luv????
awesum :)
this kinda reminded me of d comment u left on mah blog...d yin n d yang...d mirror..male n female one...remember??
can i know the origin of thought...
hmmm...
ths is intersting man
cheers :)
Pallav
so sweetly romantic..the kind of romance before you dare to date :)brought a smile and a question? is that you ? :))
whoa whoa w-h-o-a... :)
nice 'un dere, mate. lovely flow of thots!
someone in love?
separated from ur love?
Rrrrrooohh-maaannntic! :D
such ardour and passion... Way to go!
u hv a great skill with words...wonderful Kartz!
Keshi.
Ahem Ahem. Wot is this? Love Shove n all eh! ;)
One question thought, for that serious a poetry, why do u have those bears n all in the illustration! Really!
Impressive... ;) The pines are for..?
wow, bro.. sexy!! :P
Hidden feelings...?? ;)
such passion... beautifully expressed!!!
Pangs of separation... Painfully beautiful. And romantic. Keep writing...
my half thirsts for your half...
loved that line :)
hello Kartz... this was my first visit to your blog and i loved it very very much... your poet makes these words come alive.
hope to keep coming back for more.
take care. and please do visit...
my half thirsts for your half...
loved that line :)
hello Kartz... this was my first visit to your blog and i loved it very very much... your poet makes these words come alive.
hope to keep coming back for more.
take care. and please do visit...
The *lust* in love..?
I like! :)
Being in a long distance relationship of sorts... this poem really touched my heart. :)
plain awesome, mate... beautifully brought out!
touching... really touching,,, good luck!
:O
kartz??? really?? you wrote that??!!
:O
simply amazing... How emotions can be put forth. A beauty...
yang and yin... chinese philosophy right?... i read it in my text... lol... anyways... those two words had left me enchanted then too... something mystical about the two words... and about your poem too.. loved it.. !!
thanks for liking the poem kartz...
please see if you like this one...
http://amritorupa.blogspot.com/2009/04/insomnia.html
did you like my blog? if you did, please become a follower so that i can share with you whenever i write. it will be cool to have a reader like you who is himself a poet.
First, I am totally overwhelmed by your Web site! It blew me away. I loved the poem too. Somewhat tortured, yet hopeful? Really evocative. Thanks.
Wow that was beautiful....felt as if one soulmate is missing the other..:)
good one...
do visit mine sometime...
leep writing..:)
ooh,such intense emotions! :)
(but thats a really vulgar photo up there :P, this excellent poem deserves more than a cartoon! :P )
Kartz-this was amazing.
Mesmering usage of words.
Take a bow,Mr.Swaminathan.
ok, but come read my story...
neat !!! i say both for the prtrayal of feelings and also for the simplicity !! enjoyed reading it :)
##Richa
Ha ha, yeah, not often... Figured it's time for a change and Mayz's posts sorta helped too. ;)
##Kajal
Merci, mademoiselle...
##Priya
Thank you, ma'am... :)
##Isha
Thanks, buddy... What brought it about? Lets just keep it under wraps for now. ;p
##Netika
Ha ha; nothing like what u think. I assure you. :)
##AV
Heh heh heh, keep guessing, dudette! ;)
##Seher
Thanks, di! :)
##Vinnie
Gratias, milady. Too kind. :)
##Gail
Thank you, ma'am. Glad you liked it.
##Mehreen
Ha ha, thanks yaar... :)
##Sumit
Thanks.
Welcome to Contorted Reality. I appreciate your time to stop by to leave a note.
Hope to see you more often.
Peace. Have a nice day.
##jayaram
Thanks, uncle... Glad you liked it.
##Vikram
Thanks, bro... :)
##Arnab
Thanks dude...
##JoyceHeh heh heh... I leave it to the reader to interpret. ;)
##Chriz
Heh heh heh; none yet. ;)
##Amrita
Naah... :)
##Mayz
Oh yeah... I did say so just a while back. And guess what your next post turned out to be. ;)
##Pallav
Well, lets keep the origin under wraps. Just thoughts in motion. ;)
Thanks dude...
##verbivore
Heh heh heh, y the doubt? ;) This blog doesn't have a co-author! ;P
##Obsidian
Gratias...
##dark-arthas
Thanks, mate...
##Praveen
Naah... Nothing at all. :)
##Overmind
Thanks!
##Anonymous
Glad you liked it...
##Keshi
Thanks a ton. dudette... :)
##Divya Iyer
Heh heh heh... Bas, timepass. I cdnt get any other pic. ;) And y *love-shove*? Ummm, chumma, pozhudu pole... :D
##Jake
Ha ha... No one, yet! :D
##Sawan
Thanks! ;)
##Kevin
;D no comment...
##Blake
Thanks, dude... Glad you stopped-by.
Wanting to be together.. what a lovely poem
Haiku Poems
##Anonymous
Thanks for stopping-by...
##Amritorupa
Thank you for stopping-by to leave a note. I appreciate your time...
##Amritorupa
Thank you for stopping-by to leave a note. I appreciate your time...
##Anonymous
Or u may say, *love* in lust... Ur take. :P
##Kirti
Thanks. Glad you like it.
##G
Thanks...
##Anonymous
Thanks for the read...
##Divya
*ahem* Yes. :)
##Anonymous
Thanks...
##Mona
Yep, Chinese thought... Thanks. Glad you liked it.
##Amritorupa
A pleasure... Blogrolling you now. Will follow you when I get Google's Friend Connect sorted.
##Dheera
Thanks a megaton, ma'am. Humbled. :)
And yes, hope. The *only* good thing that came out from Pandora's box.
##Mahesh
Thanks for the visit. I appreciate your time to read and leave a note.
Peace.
##Ayushi
Heh heh heh, why don't you make an apt cartoon for this. ;)
Thanks for the read. How are you recovering?
##Jayu
*bows*
Merci, madame! :)
##Amritorupa
Will do.
##Pratibha
Thank you... :)
##workhard
Thank you for the read. I appreciate your time to leave a note. Keep visiting! :)
Peace.
LOVED it, thanks for tagging me on this
Thanks for the read... And welcome to my blog.
Will tag you to my posts, henceforth...
you know what this one forces me to wonder where do u get ur inspiration from...you have one for sure..
it is so romantic n beautiful..lovely piece of work.it is a pleasure to read them...keep writing..
cheers.
Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate your time and readership.
My inspiration(s)? Life. The people I meet. Death.
Peace.
it ws soo b'ful !
romantic n lovely!!
ur poems r so niceeeee
##Priyanka
And you are too kind... :)
Neatly done!!! Keep writing!!! I am following your blog henceforth. It is a nice spot.
##AjeyThank you. I appreciate your readership.
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