There was a flower, the wind once knew,
That spread the fragrance of love.
With her around, time - but rapidly - flew,
For she was a gift, from above.
There was a flower, the wind once knew,
Vibrantly bright, yet plain.
Dissipating freshness and happiness anew,
She smelled of the Earth-drenching rain.
There was a flower, the wind once knew,
Distinctly apart from the rest!
His liking for her but immensely grew,
Ah! How cruel Fate doth jest!
She left without notice; no trace or clue,
The time he wish'd for, ne'er came.
There was a flower, the wind once knew,
Alas, he would ne'er know her name.
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92 comments:
applaude applaude!!
soft...soothing...sad :(
there was a blogger, the vins once knew, he blogged and he poeted for once very true:)
sorry for this crap i made up!
so tell me, who is this flower in ur life n where did she leave for ?
oh no!
weren't we all supposed to dedicate some poems to Mother Earth for Earth day - 22md ???
god you just get better and better. honestly, loved it! in fact. i'd say its one of your best. brilliant work!
d wind in love too? damn..that leaves only me out! :P
Oooh la la!!! Someone's getting all mushy mushy. :P
Amazingly portrayed. :)
Cheers
why?
why wouldnt he know?
sad kinda sullen end ..
nice one
chriz
so very sweet !! i loved reading it :)
I simply loved it. Its true when a boy/ girl likes someone and before they knew, it just vanishes or miss it.
ehh! toh tragic end hoyi gava :P
well any resemblance to the ..:P reality??
Tears brim my eyes...
that flower so tells me a story i behold to feel and live :)
Hi Kartz-
you are a true romantic. Lovely poem, complete and sad. You are SO profound and loving.
Love Gail
peace.....
I Loved it Karthik! So sad and so true to life. God Bless you, you write from the heart.
a melancholic recital, dude... very nicely expressed! Heartfelt.....
aha... beautiful...love and pain always go hand in hand.. don't they?? loved it!!
lovely flow and perfect rhyming... your poetry is a class apart!!... keep writing .... your poems make my day!!
exams were fine... now prep leave for a month.. exams again next month... see you around.. take care!!
Awwwwee- the wind is always screwed. :( sad for him.
but beautiful poem kartz :)
wat a brilliant line
"there was a flower, the wind once knew"
exceptional!!! u said everythin in dat one line...
a flower - not the flower...some flower...nameless...yet beauitful for it was a flower
the wind - frolickin...neva stable...u kno aaj yahan kal wahan
once knew - an incomplete story...
Ahem..ahem.. I guess this has confirmed my conjecture..
More than that it is a beautiful poem..
BTW, I realized you are amazing with poems :)
very very nice one Kartz... loved it much :)
OMG..i hope you know how beautiful these verses are...they are amazingly profound and beautiful..bravo...
you could try to publish few of your works...seriously..
i wish i could write poetry..but not everyone is as gifted...
keep writing..and keep rocking..
cheers
Very touching...
frm whr did u get these thougts..
n wud like to tell u u got a superb Vacab....
sometime i hv to take dictionary help..
:( painfully beautiful recital...
sweeeeet words man... Keep em comin...
hhhnnnm just lovely..
n yes i am back.. :)
will catch up on the rest of the posts soon :)
I find happiness embedded in this melancholy.. The pain of waiting forever for the one you love is blissful.. this shows the strength of the bond.
Loved it as usual. cheers :)
i was about to say what Mayz said.. an incomplete story.. touching soothing.. but incomplete.. :(
Wow, the end was sad. :(
bro, hv u lrnt music?? if u hhvnt ask some one to tune it, it wud make a beautiful song :)
Sweet, lovely and touching.:)
just beautiful Kartz!
Sometimes the beauty in knowing someone is not knowing everything abt them.
Keshi.
flowers,the one day beauties!
very well written,kartz! :)
Am back 2 blogs after a long time... had exams till yest. so how r u doin?
how cme im late in cmmenting? or is the others too fast? Ths is sweet & touching ..reminded me of sme old poetry where the poet says ..fate does drive iron wedgers btween lovers ..for their union, her ruin would be.
Heartfelt... Beautifully done!
oh the tales... happy endings are never a guarantee...
a tinge of sorrow as one reads... beautiful, nonetheless...
acclaim as a masterpiece..
"there was a flower, the wind once knew"--i luved this line..:)...
pining away..pining away...karthik is sitting on the old pine tree and pining away :P
The far away love.. sad but beautiful :)
nice one as always buddy.
the last para my fav.
I dont have any words to say anything...
That simply touched me..
Flower aur wind ka LOVE.....
good creativity...and good play of words....
Simply awesome...
Cheers...
beauty!
liked both images and the way they connected..
love never disappoints..
wishes..
can't the wind follow the fragrance...?
painfully beautiful. as always...
Get a move on, kid.
##Richa*bows*
##VinnieSomeone's being ultra humble. :)
And no flower in my life. Yet. Blissfully single. :D
##VinniePlans resolved! No turning back! :)
##DivyaGee, thanks buddy. Glad you feel so. :)
##TrinaaWind doesn't wait, either. ;)
##IshaWho? Who? *looks around*
:)
##ChrizWe aren't entitled to know everything, are we? :(
##PratibhaThanks! :)
##PriyaSo true, ma'am!
##JoyceKeep thinking. :P
##Jayu:( C'est la vie, madame!
##Seher:) Goodie!
##Gail
Thank you!
##DheeraThank you for the wishes, ma'am. Glad you liked it!
##kevinThanks!
##monaThanks for the kind words, buddy... And good luck!
##AmritorupaThank you...
##MayankI really appreciate the time you took to interpret it all. Thank you!
##NetikaAm I? :)
##KanagarajThanks a lot, mate!
##AnkitaGive it a shot. Let your thoughts flow. I hope to see one from you very soon!
Thanks for the read.
Publishing? Not given it a thought. Yet. :)
##Pallav:)
##PallavThanks for the appreciation, dude. I don't mean to make it tough for u! Sachchi! :(
Tc. :)
##AnonymousGratias...
##OvermindDanke!
##AnilaYaaaay! Welcome back! :)
##Preeti:)
##KajalThere is something alluring about incompleteness too, right? Hence the tale...
##KirtiKya karen... :(
##AnilThanks bro'... Glad you felt so! :) Lets see... Know anyone?
##snehaSo good to see you again. How have you been?
##KeshiBingo!
##ArchanaWelcome back!
##verbivorehereLate or early, you commented. That matters. Thanks! :)
##JakeThanks!
##dark-arthasYep...
##GThanks for the read...
##AmritaThanks! :)
##A-u-c-b-c-i-c :D:P
##IlleenThank you. And welcome to Contorted Reality... I appreciate your time to stop by and leave a note.
##VikramThanks dude. Glad you liked it.
##MaheshThanks a lot, dude...
##MIPThank you!
##blakeWish he did...
##AnonymousYou read it all just to say that? What a loser!
wow...so touchin n sweet!!
back after a long time... d 1st poem i read of urs ws 'my bonny sweetheart' n how much i loved it...!!
##Priyanka
Thanks! And welcome back!
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